I wrote this poem about the experience of listening to music. I need some suggestions for a title cause i just cant think of a good one. Also tell me what you like about it :)
Dive into the music
Clutch to every beat
Embrace every word
Don't let the feeling slip away.
Sink deeper, further
into the deep surrounding ocean.
Give myself to the music.
Let it pull me with its
strong currents.
Tossed, jerked, rolled,
lifted high to suddenly fall down deeper.
Floating through my own mind,
Separate from the rest of the world.
Beutiful heart warming makes me want to get up and jump for joy I think a good title would be ME AND MUSIC
ReplyDeletei really like this poem. it really tells what you think about music and yeah a good title would be me and music :)
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